diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/bloodmagic/patchouli_books/guide/en_us/entries/demon_will/soul_snare.json b/src/main/resources/data/bloodmagic/patchouli_books/guide/en_us/entries/demon_will/soul_snare.json
index ce60ba5c..29babbd6 100644
--- a/src/main/resources/data/bloodmagic/patchouli_books/guide/en_us/entries/demon_will/soul_snare.json
+++ b/src/main/resources/data/bloodmagic/patchouli_books/guide/en_us/entries/demon_will/soul_snare.json
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     },
     {
       "type": "text",
-      "text": "Using the Snare is simple enough - craft a good quantity of them, find a hostile mob, and throw Snares at them until white particles appear. Kill them quickly and you should get a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/demon_will)Demon Will$(). Before you ask, yes, the Looting enchantment will improve your odds. Once you've gathered a couple, you can get to work on crafting yourself a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/sentient_sword)Sentient Sword$() and a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/soul_gem)Tartaric Gem$() - these will make collecting $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/demon_will)Demon Will$() much easier."
+      "text": "Using the Snare is simple enough - craft a good quantity of them and throw them at hostile mobs. White particle effects will appear around them; then it's time to go in for the kill. On death, they will drop a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/demon_will)Demon Will$(). Before you ask, yes, the Looting enchantment will improve your odds. Once you've gathered a couple, you can get to work on crafting yourself a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/sentient_sword)Sentient Sword$() and a $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/soul_gem)Tartaric Gem$() - these will make collecting $(l:bloodmagic:demon_will/demon_will)Demon Will$() much easier."
     },
     {
       "type": "image",